Paraphrasing Lincoln

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Paraphrasing Lincoln (Paraphrasing Practice)


"But this is, after all, a movie, a drama, an entertainment (if you will), not a documentary. For all of our wailing about the lack of historical knowledge, awareness, teaching and reading, historical and biographical movies increasingly feel compelled to pay a much heavier duty in period-correct appearances than the costume-dramas of our parents’ generation, and it’s satisfying to see that Spielberg pays his duty so lavishly. But a preoccupation with authenticity at the expense of story has capsized more than a few historical movies at their dock, and Lincoln has not entirely escaped that problem." - A Civil War Professor Reviews 'Lincoln': Daily Beast
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My paraphrase of the selected passage:

The author of this review states that this is only a movie for entertainment purposes, it is only fictional and does not depict events entirely historically accurately. While it is understandable to hold films accountable for accuracy, the purpose of this film was not to educate the viewer. Because of the attention to accuracy in these films, directors of movies now feel more responsible to make their films accurate, and it is nice to see that Spielberg took time to make sure that he did so. This obsession with films being one hundred percent accurate to the past has negatively affected many movies and films, and this problem has slightly affected Lincoln in many ways.



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  1. LilyOctober 19, 2018 at 11:21 AM

    I see no issues

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  2. Ella JaneOctober 19, 2018 at 11:27 AM

    I see no issues. The only thing I may look at is the length of your paraphrase. Sometimes when the paraphrase is shorter it can be considered a summary, but I don't think your passage suffers from this problem.

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